Needs work
There's not much shading, and the sword's coloring is a bit sloppy. Luckily, metal is a cool place for high contrast, so that should be easy on the armor. For the chain mail, try to imply that there's chain mail instead of drawing it out. For an example look up pictures of how people draw the scales on Aquaman's outfit.
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