Interesting design
I thought this was somewhat differant and kind of unique in a way, one thing that looks off to me with this is the "EDGES" looks cut off all around maybe its the black "BACKROUND" maybe its the space inbetween but just looks abit off, the rest of it the drawing the style looks pretty good nice shading and detail so i liked it, the cut out style does make it somewhat differant so notbad there.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would give the backround a more "CLOUDY" touch, maybe add some borders and such.