no dude, pantie hose give her a good zing!
the hand should be bigger, ad so should the core, body if you going for a real life size girl thing.
and i reccomend using shadows on the lines on eerything. like i know in photo shop you can give the boarder a scecific type. could be angled or a completely dierent style. i may be thinking of illustrator, hope you use this feature soon! ^^