I don't like this image at all. I'm gradually learning new things about illustrator and my homework each week is to make an image using the new skills I acquired during the class. With the exception of the flowers, this image closely resembles the ocean view closest to my home.
Its really nice
Now this ia some really nice woek you have a nice style this painting style here creates a beautiful visual and you really cant get over it i do think it needs a center focus piece like a sail boat maybe a stronger beam of light etc anyways awsome talents
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Maybe a more focus point as suggested
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These are getting really nice! Once again, your colors are wonderful, and the way you set it up is nice in general. Of course, you had your ocean view to use as inspiration, which is great.
I agree with CD about the canvas and the flowers, but it's not a deadbreaker for me. I'm sure you can cut the canvas away in a separate program, even mspaint if you want to :p
If you keep this up, you'll make it to the art portal in no time :D
Thank you for the review!
Not a bad image at all, though I wonder if that white canvas is supposed to show? I imagine it'd be better without, but in a way this is like looking a window (just need some more detail on the canvas to make it a wall). I like the colors; line-work in the ocean especially, flowers feel a bit simple, but color's good. Keep it going!
-cd-
The white canvas wasn't there in the illustrator document. I'm don't know why it appears this way on NG. I agree that the flowers are simple. I should have made a flower out of shapes and used it as a brush. Thank you!
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