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Oct 28, 2012 | 11:51 AM EDT
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Illustration
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600 x 927 px
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Author Comments

A poster for a school project. If you're reading this, I would highly appreciate if you could answer in the comment the following questions:

1. What do you see in this image?

2. What do you recommend I do to make this image better?

Thank you

Reviews


f0xenf0xen

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

i see a feamle soldier/superhero/someone bad ass, falling or being pushed, and her arm muscles. to make it better, i'd recommend to push the contrast a biiiit more. and the hair is a bit feathery. otherwise i like it. the colors are pretty awesome.



ZaneZansorrowZaneZansorrow

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I left my critique on the thread that you want the critique on.

But Overall: I think color need work, and set up for the composition.



Karo-KorpKaro-Korp

Rated 5 / 5 stars

BITCH BE FALLING TO HER DEATH YO!

Awesome work, such lovely texture on her body suit thing, really nice.

Proportions look pretty decent and I like the way you've forshortened shizzle. Perspective work is done really well here man, g'job.



DaffD1608DaffD1608

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Simply amazing!



bigCman321bigCman321

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

I was writing a review earlier, but newgrounds had some server issues and it was erased when I submitted it, so this may be more brief than I intended.

1. Futuristic athlete, high tech special agent, or maybe a superhero.
2. On the lower half of her body, the lines of her suit don't look as symmetric as they should, also assuming what she's wearing is a some sort of tight rubbery suit, then there should be some wrinkles here or there (reference some pictures of latex/rubber catsuits... hmm). Also, unless she's a superhero, maybe you could give her some tactical gear, like a small vest and belt with a combat knife/pistol, and add plenty of sexy straps. Also I think her visor/goggles could be more reflective, and the white glow behind her seems a bit unnecessary.

Keep up the good work, and keep improving! :)


Blud-Shot responds:

Thanks BigCman, I appreciate the feedback. I'm gonna make the adjustments.