http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/25952000/ngbbs581869b32b865.jpg is the link to the WIP.

I think I layed the ink on to thick. It's my first time using inks and looking at the picture now, I could have used cross hatching in place of those really dark shadows. At the time, I didn't know what to do so I just decided to make the lighting dramatic. I'm not sure if it worked or not.
I wasn't sure whether to put this in the beginner's or open but since I was undecided, I went with open to keep the beginner's side clear.