Love the way you painted the muscles

Its awesomous check out my art whenever you can becky.

Hey Becky, its me (from Chat) love this piece, you're quite the artist : P ttyl
P.S Come to the chat & chat it up XD

I think the abdominal muscles are in the wrong place. The weapon handle blends into the dark background in a way that makes it look like you forgot to draw the thumbs - in reality the same light thats hitting the hand and the lower part of the weapon would create a highlight, and the light bouncing off the character would create a bounce light on the opposite side - including these will make the handle pop into the foreground.

Another great piece although if I were you I would have blended the shading on the head so that it didn't look like pencil lines, also I would have spent more time on the hand holding the sword as currently it looks a bit unfinished.

I think that the background although it is simple suits the piece brilliantly as it gives it that haunted, warped feeling that you get from the movie/games. This is probably your best work to date. Keep it up.