An interesting comic idea, Ill give you that.
The inking seems ok, but it would benefit from a bit of line variety (having thicker and thinner lines).
The shading with the dissortion tool seems like a nice stylistic idea, but IMO it should be used in moderation. It tends to take away quite alot of platicity from the picture if overused. My advice would be to use the dissort-shading to reinforce the insane images the protagonist sees. Use normal shading everywhere else.
That aside, the overal style that you seem to pursue fits very well to the tone of your story (jugding by this page alone).
The core for a good story and comic is given here, though. I'm interested to see where this is going.
