Exellent piece

However in the comments you say she is very thin. Like other said, she looks a bit on the chubby side. Even though she might be wearing many clothes, there could be other clues to tell me her figure. If I look at her exposed parts, the lower arms, hands, chest and face, they don't look thin. I would expect more angles, more pronounced bone structure like knucles, cheekbones and colar bones. You could perhaps make tighten up the belt and lower her shoulders a bit or elevate her head.
As it is, I like it very much, especially with the story to go with it.

man o man

man i like what you drew... but i would have stuck to the a guy being frankinstein.

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nice realistick and il love the steam punk ganre

Very nice...

...But I miss Naera :(

Well well,well.

Thats really creative its nice. :) Lets give it a 3 points.But!,Her face doesnt fit to her body and her outfit,its kinda something old. And btw i red the author commented that she was really thin but she just has a big utility belt around her natural waist ok so that explanation worked that well but,she looks kinda fat,and as I said it doesnt fit to the face the face of the girl is kinda like something like a warior(girl) and not something like just selling in the street :| and for that i will give it points,and but, I really like its work but theres just something kinda diff. thing that I didnt like,and for that i will give it 5 points. ;) Ok so lets add all the points 3 points+2 points+5 points=9 points!Excellent work ;)