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Inner Spirit

Not too much to say about this piece besides its one of my 1st attemts at drawin a person......just enjoy i guess and please comment.....all ideas are welcome (besides mean ones) THANKZ

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Shati

2010-05-20 17:22:57

Good

For you first attempt in drawing a person, I have to admit it is astonishing. But as you wrote, I would be happy to give you some advice about this:
The upper curve you made in the nose looks a little bit odd. just make the line straight, this will look better.
The right line of the face is too straight, then. The line should come forward at the forehead to the brows, then at the eyes make a small curve in the inward direction, then a curve in the outward direction, to draw the cheekbone. Then make the line again straight until you reach the chin.
The shading is good and you definitely have great talent.
For the tiger - I LOVE IT! KEEP IT UP!

ArticWolf811 responds:

thanx dude and i can see wat ur sayin bout the right side of the face and ive been tryin to wrk on tht recently, but the nose is kinda meant to b lik tht cus i was actually drawing a friend of mine and he has a bit of a slant to his nose lik tht but now tht u say it, it does seem lik "too" much of a slant.....but ill keep those things in mind nxt time