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Forever hold your peace...

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Very nice work here

So this was cool and I like that you added in some frames in this I think where the frame of the ring scene you should have a bit more sparkle on the ring, You have a Stellar piece of art here and the Blending is very nice, the idea is simple but you added some depth to this and made it your own style and thats what I really like about this, a top notch piece of art if you ask me, a very well done piece of art, So keep up the fantastic art style and keep sharing with us your beautiful talent, I will for sure look forward to even more, because this is some nice work, but anyways before I go Just wanted to say I really enjoyed reviewing your work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think where the frame of the ring scene you should have a bit more sparkle on the ring

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As mentioned already, groom's head is huge in the final panel. Otherwise, this piece brings back memories. Great storyboarding. Easy to understand what's going on.

That one guy really doesn't seem willing to be there... it's strange seeing all the happy people around him, yet he's looking down; containing his emotions; holding his peace, as the title says. I feel like the others should notice. Like his aura of unwillingness should break the spell somehow. He grabs your attention right away, so it's like a loose end in the scene.

But I like how visual that is, and the detail is good, albeit somewhat simple, with expressions not all that detailed. The frame with the hands is the one that really looks perfect. Only bit that feels a bit off is the angle in the final scene, when his head is somewhat too big for the picture. Angled so that the girl could be looking at the other guy though... you wonder what's going on outside the frames of what this picture shows. What expression she holds there. What's in their minds. Really makes you think, this piece.

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Apr 7, 2015
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