The only problem I have is with the wrist, it appears broken, other than that its great.

Very cute. I've never understood the whole overlay thing that you can see near the bottom right of the image, but the linework and coloration is really top-notch. The face and hair really turned out perfectly.

The cloth looks a little odd near the shaded bit at the bottom, which kind of threw me off - the shaded area is too stark a contrast in my opinion, and it doesn't really make sense how that one particular area is more shaded. Moving up the picture, you can see the hand that is reaching out has something strange going on around the wrist - the crease of her thumb protrudes too far into her palm. Finally, the model's right shoulder and neck are somewhat off. The neck looks as if it's way too far to the left, while the longer right shoulder is left with a strange meaty section that creates a strange indentation at the deltoid.

Amazing improvement! Love it.