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Annika's soul turns violent...
EDIT: Okay! Updated with some of the changes people suggested to me. Feel free to tell me it still looks like crap, haha.
EDIT: Edited again with some really minor fixes.
I'm sure i've commented on this before but i think i found a solution as to why i feel like this is off. While the foreshortening is fine, there are elements which don't seem to have been drawn according to the perspective change. For example, the knee-cap on the back, which is shaded fine, is drawn as if it's front on. based on the pose i think you want, we should not be able to see the bottom silver edge of that gold kneecap, it should almost be just a line. also, the top edges should be as fat as the kneecap itself. Secondly, while i think this is more a stylistic choice than an "error", the reason why it looks "flat" is because there is a persistent black outline around the girl from the original lineart. that line, while small, brings the entire figure into focus, even the extremities far from the 'camera'.
I still think this is incredible, the detail is amazing, but those are my critiques if you're interested.
anybody can be driven to battle with enough motivation
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i love it! 5\5
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