The paper like background seems familiar. It almost seems like this could be something in a kid's book. It's reminiscent of "The Very Hungry Caterpillar". It's still good just for what it is. I like how they appear to be part of his eyes. That would give you the best vision!
I'm guessing you could show the vision attacking something. I mean, it was supposed to be like eye beams, right? It looks like there are clouds behind him. Well, those are probably bushes. It's a nice little drawing.