I really can't say I didn't like this. It's mostly because it seems to be exactly like something I would submit. Then again, it does look pretty immature. I could see you making this more as a little kid. It's still fine for what it is. Was this a bookmark?
Hey, you can certainly use it as one! I'm one of the few people who still reads. The outlines are fairly good. I just expected more from someone as accomplished as you. I like how authentic it is with the dents in the paper.