okay, just caught onto this today and...
wow. just wow. I mean, the dialogue could use some work (even proper people allow themselves to be politically incorrect sometimes), you know, like... a little cussing, would help. say... "What the fuck is that?!" I mean, last panel of page 7 kind of said that without the words, but0-0000----
aaaahhhh-uhhh-ehmmm.. are these, like, yours? originally? like you drew them and colored them and stuff? because even if you didn't, ilt looks like a goodish, semi-typical hentai comic so far. tentacles, check. multiple girls, check. girls with weirdly-colored hair, check. at least one cumshot within the first ten pages... well, that's kind of new. just the wording could, like... slack off a bit.
LATER!!
