no figure and most important NO TITS

I like this one.

Your shading is what makes your pieces come to life. Good job, but practice with the actual drawing. Because some stuff is off...

What happened to her legs?!

Dear God, this woman must have been deformed at birth - her legs are all out of proportion and the way they bow like that, she looks to have some serious problems.

With the length of the legs, please concentrate on the length from hip to knee and knee to ankle - both measurements should be practically the same - the lack of distinguishing for the knee joint does make this look rather weird. The curvature of the legs themselves lead me to think two things - the bow legged stance and the fact that her thighs seem to be quite a way apart. Perhaps I'm reading too much into this, but her vagina must be absolutely massive.

I think that given a choice, I'd have made the shoes heeled, as opposed to platformed, so there might have been a better look. I like the colour scheme and the glossy effect that you chose to give an impression of a PVC clad dominatrix. When it comes to the lack of detail and the relative simplicity of your drawing style, it does look a little flat around the cleavage area, so I am led toward thoughts of "should I really be interested in this?" as the girl does look a little young. How much detail would you be able to add without adding too much is the question and I feel that there is still room for manoeuvre on that front.

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good

i like it

yuss

Yeah I do definitely like the way the plainness and sort of unimpressed timidness of the expression works to give exactly the feel you described, the simplicity of the way it's stylized really works great too. It kind of reminds me of the art style from Ghost World, or what I vaguely remember of it.

Pretty cool. This is one of the better level collab submissions IMO, too bad you cant keep the red background for it but it at least it still works on the white.