I really like the composition and color choices. The figures stand out well from the background, the simplified style of the buildings/clouds looks quite nice. I would have given it a five, but the face on the left could be a little more structures, and the shoulder less slanted towards the camera. Overall it doesn't detract from the piece, but it is something to consider in future. Keep up the good work!
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This is my attempt to create a comic panel that seems like it's been taken out of an existing story, when in reality that story doesn't exist. The general idea of the exercise is to test my ability to convey story through panel composition.
The composition definitely works. 'Draws the eye where it needs to go. The character's expression coincides with the attitude in what she's saying so it really feels very life like just in that. Good times.
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