I find this to be a good picture. My only complaint is that I really have no idea what's going on. Was it just meant to make more sense? If so, I think it could have been more creative. It still shows some great patterns. I love the different designs these guys have.
It shows good creativity. The . for the author comments is funny. I guess it was as non sequitor as the actual picture. It looks like some kind of negotiation. It's definitely nice to look at.