Cool
Now this was pretty cool, you have some nice ideas and a good imagination here this has a nice and dark element here you could really make a good film with all your dark stuff maybe even make a dark comic of some sort here, but regardless this was very nice I love what you have done with the eyes maybe some added shine and glow on the eyes could give off that creepy element anyways great stuff.
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I love what you have done with the eyes maybe some added shine and glow on the eyes could give off that creepy element
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