Very nice
This was a nice piece here, it does show a moremeaning then your average piece, and the memories do come alive so it was a warmfelt piece, maybe you could run it through "PHOTOSHOP" or something give it some shine or flashy effects even some borders.
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Run it through Photoshop or some art enhancer or something give it some shine or flashy effects.
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