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Wishful mishap Rejected comic

LOL this is a rejected comic, the commissioner who commission who i will name nameless Doesn't like me using the word "Allah"

and i found out he was muslim... so yeah that happened.

even though I have no intention of insulting, but he still finds it is. so, i decided to post the rejected comic here...

to be honest it's not even that clever. -_____-

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Dieemzie

2015-04-28 13:57:13

2nd panel and 5th panel have flaws in gramar and spelling.
Other than that, the art itself looks good, hand drawn and manga/anime style.
You got a bored (smokin' ;-) ) genie who'll give away *pardon* GRANT three wishes, so im wondering where this is going with the other two.

Also, took a second to see it's read from right to left xD

0N2T responds:

really? thanks for correcting me, My english is not very good. But I'm glad you still liked it. :)

bocodamondo

2015-04-28 10:35:14

lol really?... i am muslim (even though i REALLY dont like mentioning this fact :X) and dont really care if somebody uses the word allah . haha ^^

also something about that i find funny in this and i dont know if it was intentional... the fact that the comic is read from right to left (like mangas) arabic books here are also read from right to left and not left to right. but yeah anway ^^
i like this comic, the face expressions are really well done ,and the painting shading is pretty cool
good job ^^

0N2T responds:

thank you very much I'm glad you liked it. also it's not intentional i have no clue, i was only doing some wordplay.

I draw right 2 left because i'm a lefty, i used to draw left 2 right but i find it very difficult when i'm about to ink, and it gets smudge, so that's why i draw right 2 left, less smudging.